Once I decided to try a great experiment. I have always said that feedback is the gasoline that keeps my writing engine going; and a discussion arose about whether or not readers wrote more to 'new' or 'old' writers. Perhaps they thought that 'new' writers needed the input and or encouragement more than writers who've been at it a bit longer. So I started this story to decide that question, under the pen name Y-Wing. 


This story is incomplete, at five chapters. Originally it appeared at Archerland and I have decided to repost it now that Archerland has closed. Update: it's actually 6 chapters, and does kind of sort of have an ending. Want more? Please note--This was the one and only time I tried to write a physical love scene, so if that's not your scene....poof! begone.

Rainbow's End: Chapter One Rainbow's End: Chapter Two Rainbow's End: Chapter Three Rainbow's End: Chapter Four
Rainbow's End: Chapter Five Rainbow's End: Chapter Six